Discourse Analysis (Feedback)

In the previous COP seminar, I took part in a peer critique on the first draft of my Discourse Analysis essay. We gave eachother feedback using forms that pinpointed certain elements needed for a successful essay (7 stages). 

Critique 1

Critique 2

I found it really useful to receive feedback on my written work, aswell as receive ideas for themes that I have not yet explored in my essay. I also enjoyed reading my peers essays as it gave me a fresh perspective on how to go about writing my analysis. The majority of feedback I got was to go into more detail about certain points I made in my draft, e.g explain why the artists work in that certain style.