Friday 26 February 2016

COP2: Hot Dog Books + Critque


My hot dog book mockups (very simple, but demonstrate a few different ideas)
- Shop fronts inspired by Louise Lockhart - Up my street concertina
- A book that illustrates your path through a shopping centre. What you see, order of products etc.
- Maze colouring book, interactive.
- Escalator / playing with the physical function of the book? 


I think all these ideas are very basic and need more research and development. I'm particularly drawn to the idea of shop windows and how they are designed. I could look into subverting the techniques used to draw people in?

Critique

I came to this critique with a very vague idea of what I want to make for part 2. I'm really concerned that my practical work will be very closely related to my essay, and will just be illustrating it, which are qualities demonstrated in my hotdog books. The feedback I gained on them was really interesting, yet once again there wasn't really an idea that I wanted to explore. I like the idea of making my book interactive, encouraging physical interaction with my book, like an environment. 

Feedback based on my initial book ideas/mockups:

- Book inside a book?
- Different flaps (interactive quality)
- Don't just focus on physical shopping environments, look into online shopping?
- How do websites direct you? Facebook?
- Infinite Scroll? links to idea of escalator (constant flow of information)
- NEEDS MORE RESEARCH
- Think about different environments that people can be controlled around / Does it even have to be an environment?
- Think about Format of the book - may inspire content?

Proposal 

What to include in a proposal?

- Be specific
- Ideas/Themes
- Methodology
- Clear Outcome
- Materials
- Audience
- Justify what you're doing - why?
- Summary /concise
- Research, theories
- Questions
- Deadline
- Enthusiasm
- Potential Outcome

Before writing the proposal for my outcome, I need to really think of an idea. 

COP2: 1st Essay Draft - Feedback

"How are psychogeographic techniques employed by man-made consumer environments, to manipulate the way we exist within them?" (Essay Draft title)

For the first draft submission, my essay was only part finished due to lack of sources and inspiration for directions to take it in. I feel that what I did submit was successful in the way that it was properly cited/referenced and outlined a clear structure for my intentions. 

The feedback I received was really useful, from Pete and also people in my tutorial session; 

Aspects to look into:
- Argument?
- WHY?????
- Las Vegas / cultural appropriation, use of capitalism
- Clunky question
- Read more texts on psychology
- C.R - redesign of parts of the london underground, kings cross - made people more passive.
- MORE PSYCHOLOGICAL THEORIES
- Capitalism
- Semiotics by Stewart Hall, useful book.
- Mass Production / Industrialisation.
- Modern Utopia - shopping experiences, leisure. 'Shopping is leisure'

Feedback on Essay so far:
- Clear introduction
- NOT FINISHED
- Discuss Colour Theory / colour of prison walls?
- Industrial revolution and beginning of mass production / 1850's onwards
- Shape Theory